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« on: January 05, 2009, 06:23:33 PM »

Below is simply an introduction to my writting style, I am not very ambitious so if this is the only thing you see from me in a bit don't get worried...I will get around to doing SOMETHING eventually. On a side note I am actually sitting here writting this as it comes to mind. There is no rough drafting, no list of ideas, it is just me, my mind, and my keyboard at work.
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...Close your eyes and all you see is darkness, a sense of being lost forever within that nothingness. But imagine, if you will, a world within that darkness, a world much like our own. Imagine a place with tree's that grow beyond the lip of the world, all reaching for the millions of stars that dot the sky shining their endearing light upon a land of rich soil and deep undergrowth. Are your eyes closed? If not, close them now and take yourself to this place, this place of your...

IMAGINATION

My name is Sorilieus Yore and I am here to weave you a world alike no other before it. A world of dreams and unreality, where visions are real, and you don't need to see to believe. I will take you beyond the edge of the universe and drop you within this place. But I ask of you, what is it you dream at night? Are those really dreams or are they something so much more? But, for now, sleep young one, for your dreams are only the beginning of this adventure.


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Well, for the time being I have run out of ideas, but I try to draw the reader in, I try to create something that seems real yet is not. Thus do I throw in the odd aspect of a person speaking to you, almost as if you are sitting in a circle listening to this person tell their story. But alas I have had no formal training and what you see above is simply what I am capable of on short notice. I am sure there are punctuation errors in there and perhaps even a misspelled word or two. But again I am right here at my computer typing this as it comes to mind and it is only an introduction to see if my writing style is any good at all or if I should, perhaps, change/alter it.

Ah well, it may be short but I hope you all enjoyed it at least a little. Perhaps I will give you all a more thorough explanation of my world later...for now its off to bed...TALLY HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!
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« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2009, 11:33:04 AM »

I see what you mean about being in a circle listening, but when you do write something like that, you generally have to write a story to follow it up, especially if the narrator actually talks about telling a story. I'm not sure if this is just a recent post, and you are writing it now, or if this is just a sample of your writing style, but I hope to see some additions later on.
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« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2009, 05:14:12 AM »

Very nice writing style, though it was a bit cruel to leave it open like that, especially with such a catchy introduction. It makes the reader wonder about what you are talking about and all of a sudden <cut>...

So please continue, im looking forward to the next part of this cool story ^^ <3
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