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I was sinking, now I'm sunk...
« on: February 15, 2009, 10:14:53 AM »
This isn't very good, it's my first poem in months and I'm a bit rusty.

So, I crushed it.
Smashed it,
Smushed it.
Yes I squished it.
I don't think I'll miss it.
.... Honestly.

I know it wasn't easy,
You didn't always have to please me,
and I just wished that we could talk.
But we're as different as cheese and chalk
and it never would have worked
.... Honestly.

And though I killed it,
I willed it on
though hope was gone
I just couldn't let go.
But, we both know,
it was for the best.
I guess.

PS excuse the tear-stained paper
despite the dripping ink.
forgive the scrawling writing,
but really, it's not what you think.
I just, I only stubbed my toe...
I wanted to make sure, you know..?
And I've moved on. I have, I'm fine.
.....
honestly.




yea, it's crap. I wrote it a few weeks ago. on a moodswing, but hey. its the first thing I've churned out in a while so I thought I'd stick it here
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now."

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« Reply #1 on: February 22, 2009, 02:59:19 PM »
Keep churning. I really liked it  Grin especially the last part. I love dark humor.
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« Reply #2 on: June 27, 2009, 05:00:22 PM »
oo... i like it too... agreed, i love the last part Smiley
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The sunrise does not feel beautiful
A diamond never feels precious.
It isn't about what you feel like- it's about who you are

I saw this on *halowood*'s sig and i had to see the context... snowman just became a million times cooler and this forum that much more awesome 0.o

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Yeah I wasn't about to let her come in here and keep that shit up. I like this forum.
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« Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 07:23:41 AM »
thanks guys. ^^ you're always so kind!
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now."

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