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« on: April 15, 2009, 12:08:25 PM »

The following poems are about the aftermath of my epic struggle against my ex girlfriend who destroyed my life:

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I am happy,
Once you lay dead

You tore me apart inside
You told me you loved me but you lied
To you I am worthless.

I took back what is mine
Dignity happiness and them I combine
To get something you lack and search for in your chaotic strife
A damn good life.

You may have shattered my pride
You may have stolen my flame
I still see you, and wish you would have died
You and only you I can blame.

"It's time to step up, and take back what you took from me!
AND YOU CAN NEVER CORRUPT ME AGAIN!!" - Dimmu Borgir - The Serpentine Offering

Poem number 2:

The horrible feelings I get when I see you
Wants me to strangle, stab and hit as you my inside slew
The horrible atrocities and what you stole
Atleast I know you played your role.

You are disturbed, I am too, but different
You steal and manipulate, I accept and create
You stalked my friends and killed my being as down I went
You destroyed my life and me at a disaster rate.

The depths of what I feel grows deeper
You fear life and happiness as other fear the Reaper
I embrace the world with open palms
You exploit, steal and loot my very palms.

So I ask, why?
The answer: "I loved another guy"
You destroyed my life, I answer back.
"Sorry, it was never meant to turn out as it did..."
What was supposed to happen, you live in a fairly tale of flowers and butterflies?

Go on! Tell everyone about your lies
Or end your so-called "torment" and take to the skies
As dead your body in the grass lies
Because you're already dead to me, as are your lies!

AND YOU CAN NEVER CORRUPT ME AGAIN!
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« Reply #1 on: December 13, 2009, 07:39:31 AM »

Okaaaaaaaaaay.Still pretty good.
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« Reply #2 on: December 24, 2009, 08:11:11 PM »

When I read the title a certain song popped to mind...but then I read the poems. Really good, and I can see your anger in them...something I'm never able to accomplish with anything I write.
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« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2010, 03:13:53 PM »

Woah...its like you're screaming it in my face. Very nice. I like it a lot! Grin
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