The Silence

[Relym]

A boy slept soundly on the second floor
And suddenly there was a knock at the door
At this time of night, what were they asking for?
I bet now he wishes he had never known

The door swung open and two men barged in
Not a hair on their head nor a tan on their skin
They cornered the boy, and with a devilish grin...
Well, there wasn't nothin left of him but bones

The police were called, but the boy was dead
The culprits were gone, they had already fled
But they found a note, and this is what it read:
"I wish that my heart weren't made of stone."

Books were written about this horrid event
News was broadcasted and letters were sent
But nobody knows how it all really went
Except for me, but my lips are tightly sewn

A creepy little poem I made. It's meant to go to pictures, and the lips sewn shut thing is explained visually. The pale guys without hair also had their mouths sewn shut, so it all makes sense. Let me know what you think.

[TheGrayK]

Nice I was like that is some crazy shizit 
  << that guy lol

[Woo]

thats very cool and a bit creepy, I like the rhyme scheme, and I bet its awesome with pictures. it reminds me a little of a limerick I read once:

Each night my father fills me with dread
when he sits on the foot of my bed
I'd not mind that he speaks
in gibbers and squeaks,
but for seventeen years he's been dead.

I think it was mostly that that came with an illustration too.

either way, excellent work once again ^^

[Relym]

Wow. That is creepy. I'm glad you liked the poem, though. My sister is making the illustrations. They're turning out quite nicely. You can probably expect to see the finished product in about a week or so.