Death Metal Lyrics [Check it out and rate!!!]

[Tobias116]

Ok, so I thought i'd put up my first draft of death metal lyrics onto this page (the first time I put this up, not the first lyrics) for some critique since I know i'm not failsafe.

This song is meant to be growled, Cannibal Corpse style with low pitched growls, if you don't know what i'm talking about, check out this link and hear his growling.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0IOHmGMenS0

Submerged to death by Tobias Höggren:

Claustrophobic trauma.
The cold of the deeps.
Lungs filled with water.
Desperate gasps for life.

You will die by the hands of the deep.
Submerged to death.
Your struggle is useless!
Claustrophobic suffocation underwater.

Your demise will be in the deep.
Your gasps of air are useless!
Freezing terror of water.
Will be your *high pitch* DEATH!!!

You will die by the hands of the deep.
Submerged to death.
Your struggle is useless!
Claustrophobic suffocation underwater!

The muscles will cease their work.
The body will go numb.
Consciousness slipping.
Submerged to death!

You will die by the hands of the deep.
Your struggle is useless!
Claustrophobic suffocation underwater!
Submerged to death!

[C.S. Murphy]

Ahh good ol' death metal lyrics 

The only lyrics that go step by step into someones demise. Cannibal Corpse is notorious for stuff like that.


Good stuff Tobias and welcome to the forums!

While I was reading this I had the imagery in my head of someone walking across an icy pond or lake and falls through as the current pulls him away from the hole.

I always wanted to front a death metal band in a cookie monster output.

Enjoy your stay.

C.S.

[Snowman]

Dude Dethklok is similar, except I think their stuff is much more entertaining to listen to. If you're interested, check out the song Murmaider. If you've ever wondered what tools you would need to bring with you when murdering a mermaid, this song is for you! 

Second favorite song of theirs is called Bloodrocuted, if you absolutely want more Dethklok! This song is more self-descriptive from the title, haha. Enjoy 

[Kilenaa]

Eeee!!! death metal  <3 <3 <3

hey, if u like metal u should really check out Whitechapel. my fav song by them is This Is Exile... any of u heard it??