Espen's Art Book - The Third Chapter.

[Brakken]

I wish I had checked out this thread earlier; you have some awesome art here, man.

Forget favourite character from Zelda, Ganon is one of my favourite characters from anything!

You totally have to make the Gorons jamaican or something, that would be so cool 

You've read my comic? Haha, cool; glad you like it 

[Espen]

Done, so shut up... just kidding

[Brakken]

I love the multi-coloured nails 

Her hair (in front of her ear) looks like it's hanging inside her shirt. I don't know if that's what you intended, but out of personal experience: that can get itchy!

Is Imsdal an original product, or is it based off something in the Zelda universe? Just curious   

Also, nice idea with the Triforce tattoo.

[Comlock]

wow, that is a whole lot better! She looks great! nice textures too!

A small  thing. I think her head should be moved slightly screen left. It looks like her neck is pushing the head a little bit too much towards the bottle.
It should still be pushing towards the bottle (haha Imsdal! yeay!) but have it a little more subtle and the pose would feel bit more laid back and relaxed.

[Espen]

Thanks!

Its an original product, ill change it to something more Hyrulian when i start on the new one.


you're right arthur, ill test it out.. anyways.. as i stated above im going to redo both when i get my new tablet.. its impossible to work with this tablet

[Katatafisch]

damn, what an awesome design, really digging everything and these pants look so damn cool

[Ravenseye]

Kudos it looks great. The textures of the clothing are Aucking Fwsome. I want you to give me crits on clothing to get better!!!! Anyways I know you said completed so Ill just throw this in their for future works. The head just isnt holding right. I did some editing and i think it would look more like this.

[brettamatowski]

Hmm, I think it looks just fine actually. Good job, Espy!

[Espen]

Thanks for the critiques man, also looking forward to the adventures of B M M! brett  

CTRL + D'ed your serverus games blog!

[Ravenseye]

Its that it looks wrong it just looks extremly uncomfortable. I want to see my espy get the best possible work out their. A head usually when body leaning in a direction doesnt have straight axes of features. I did a crappy framing of the head and the lines should flow roundly.
 

[Espen]

sorry but i just dont see it, thanks for the help though

[Pieter]

I must say that I agree with Travis on this one...

[Snowman]

I feel like they could both work, depending on the context the image implies. Travis' fix kind of makes it seem like she's more inclined to take a drink from that water bottle, while the original pose suggests that something in front of her has her attention.

That's the way I was looking at it..

[Espen]

Yeah, whenever you talk or observe in any direction the head usually stretches out a bit.. especially when you're leaning forward.

[Pieter]

Her left shoulder should be a bit more hunched in that case I think, I also feel the neck should be slightly more slender - tough this could be an illusion created by the hairdo. Her left forearm-wrist area is very broad compared to the palm of here hand too. The chin-neck line continues into the left arm creating a tangent which makes the neck look wedged a little unnaturally.