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« Reply #30 on: June 26, 2010, 10:19:12 AM » |
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« Reply #31 on: July 09, 2010, 12:07:09 AM » |
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 http://www.thebrooksreflections.com/?p=117To be honest, I'm wondering if the order of the first two panels should be switched around, or if it makes sense as it is... |
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« Reply #32 on: July 09, 2010, 02:01:15 AM » |
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ESN, i really adore the comic strips and your drawing style. Love the satire in the works  |
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« Reply #33 on: July 09, 2010, 03:57:16 AM » |
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You're right, I think switching the first two panels would be effective.
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John and Mary had never met before, much like two hummingbirds who had also never met before.
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« Reply #34 on: July 13, 2010, 06:46:20 AM » |
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Another suggestion I received was writing "9 hours later" at the top of the 3rd panel. Anyway, I think I'll wait to get more feedback before deciding what to change... http://www.thebrooksreflections.com/?p=119 I used a uni-ball 0.18 mm orange gel ink pen for drawing this. It has very nice qualities. It also scans in black and white (making the blue sketch lines invisible), but I decided that it looked nice in colour this time. |
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« Reply #35 on: January 09, 2011, 08:53:13 PM » |
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« Reply #36 on: January 10, 2011, 07:13:17 PM » |
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(my server's upgrading, so I haven't put this on the site yet) Haha, I love the style you've drawn this in. Complements the message well. |
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« Reply #37 on: March 15, 2011, 05:05:54 PM » |
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