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A webcomic that I just started making this morning. (It is currently 8:28 AM)    Tell me what I can do to improve it, and don't say drawing, I know it sucks. UPDATE: Apparently Photobucket is being mean, so you just have to right click on the little icons and copy the URL and post it in a new window. I'll try to fix this in the mean time.
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« Last Edit: July 27, 2009, 01:49:30 AM by Relym »
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John and Mary had never met before, much like two hummingbirds who had also never met before.
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« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2009, 01:49:59 AM » |
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Yeah, I don't see any icons. However, when I used qoute and copied the URLs from there, photobucket said that your album is private and I would need your password to view it.
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« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2009, 03:39:10 AM » |
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www.tinypic.comcopy and paste the [img] code into posts. Simple as that.
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« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2009, 05:05:52 AM » |
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I tried that, and it just came up as a little broken icon.
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« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2009, 05:19:47 AM » |
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« Last Edit: July 27, 2009, 05:44:07 AM by Relym »
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« Reply #6 on: July 27, 2009, 06:00:14 AM » |
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The third and fifth one are great 
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« Reply #7 on: July 27, 2009, 08:10:25 AM » |
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I agree, the third and fifth are funny as hell. As for the drawing.... well ya know that already!  Keep at it man! 
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« Reply #8 on: July 27, 2009, 09:53:23 AM » |
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I liked the last one the most. I mean i get the artistic side of metal but sometime i do go what the f*** are they even saying.
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« Reply #9 on: July 27, 2009, 12:27:27 PM » |
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Thanks for all the great feedback, guys! I really appreciate it. I'll be sure to continue this. 
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« Reply #10 on: July 29, 2009, 12:59:15 PM » |
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« Reply #11 on: July 30, 2009, 10:46:42 AM » |
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« Reply #12 on: July 30, 2009, 10:52:15 AM » |
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These are brilliant. 
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« Reply #13 on: July 30, 2009, 10:58:54 AM » |
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Thanks  My sister thinks they're offensive and not humorous, and my dad got really mad at the blind man one, so I almost stopped making 'em for a while.
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« Reply #14 on: July 30, 2009, 12:42:08 PM » |
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Really? I consider myself to be a pretty straight laced guy morally speaking, and I didn't find any of these offensive, not even slightly. But then again, I am a truck driver/tattoo artist, so I guess I am probably not really the standard by which too judge..... 
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