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« on: October 19, 2009, 12:47:53 AM » |
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Okay I just wanted to write a poem so here it is I actually just made this up inside the post topic page in fact as I am writing this the poem does not exist!
Fools
The world a stage, In which we host a play. Our fates written lines, from which we cannot stray. Our lives a page, from which our fate shines.
Not great but as mentioned before just wrote it, also I didn't really edit it. I kind of went for a Speed poem Idea.
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« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2009, 02:52:51 PM » |
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This seems like a fun idea. It won't necessarily rhyme, but here goes:
The crack of a sharp tongue Respected and feared A double edged blade
Assault Physically, it is a felony Verbally, it is a sport A volley of razors Dodging, catching, throwing Only one way to end it
Never underestimate The power of a single word A letter The thought of a letter
You are well armed Don't hurt yourself
(How'd I do?)
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« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2009, 11:41:41 PM » |
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Ok, its been a while since I've writen anything. let the blarble ensue.
Lackluster, I've lost my sheen Oh let the world just swallow me, I'll be lost to you, and you'll move on and I'll go mad and you'll be gone. its not so bad, its not so good, and though I always knew it would come down to this, to loss and gain, I've had you there to keep me sane.
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now." <3 Florence. Woo: 4 Relym: 18 Snowman: 1 Halowood: 5 Iota: 5 some_guy: 0 TheGrayK: 1 Nimnim: 2 - Tisys Lamyl - 
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« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2009, 11:57:03 PM » |
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Lingering Dead
My secrets, you will never know Even if I told you, so Blink, my friend, and I'll be gone For I'm the god of Babylon
Something on this planet lacks As though the world were made of wax I'll leave here soon, but don't dismay, For I'll come back another day
If you'll still live, I wouldn't know Not that I would doubt it, though I enjoyed your company, good host But now shall leave the humble ghost
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« Reply #4 on: November 23, 2009, 12:21:55 AM » |
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I'm choking on your excuses as you force them down my throat. Don't lie to me, I've already seen what you've done. Don't lie to me, I've already seen who you are. And I'm never folding again like camp beds, like canvas chairs and tents. Detritus of our little world and all the ways we try to escape it.
Semantics. Everything else is empty, and the rest is scarcely meaningful. Why am I so lost in this? Release, let go! And please, Don't lie to me. I've already seen how this goes.
JANELKRJNFAEFNILAEJNFHEBFjbh I feel like I've just been slamming my fists against the keyboard with this one.
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now." <3 Florence. Woo: 4 Relym: 18 Snowman: 1 Halowood: 5 Iota: 5 some_guy: 0 TheGrayK: 1 Nimnim: 2 - Tisys Lamyl - 
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« Reply #5 on: November 23, 2009, 01:05:34 AM » |
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Just put my poem through the blender of google translate and this is what happened:
Do you know the secret. When. Me and my friend Blink. For I the Lord of Babylon.
No part of the world If the new world. This is a short time, let me go astray. Back on Monday.
I do not know where you live. I doubt that even more. My work can be used. But profits are now living spirit.
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« Reply #6 on: November 24, 2009, 11:55:03 AM » |
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Relym, you may have yourself a new art form there great idea! Also this is the first time I've revisited this thread. Glad to see others trying this out! Great poems guys 
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« Reply #7 on: November 24, 2009, 12:04:31 PM » |
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Haha yeah, idk about art, but it's certainly fun.
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« Reply #8 on: November 24, 2009, 12:13:40 PM » |
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well the bit where it says "but profits are now living spirit."
that is some crazy stuff because in todays world that statement is almost true. CEO's and the type would rather destroy lives than lose profit.
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« Reply #9 on: November 24, 2009, 02:32:24 PM » |
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True. There are parts where it makes sense in a depressing sort of way.
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« Reply #10 on: November 24, 2009, 03:23:44 PM » |
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LOL yeah pretty crazy how things work out. Im gonna go for another Not going to do any editing (I will go without using punctuation as well) and that means no backspace here I go! Guiding life with arms of fortune Swaying death with words of fate Directing chaos with hands of hate Influencing order with eyes of civility Pushing nature aside for economic growth Sliding humanity back for a quick buck Pulling the hair of the earth to bend her to your will You the everyday super villain hiding your evil behind wal-mart It kind of drops off here at the end. But thats all I could think of oh well  I gave it the Relym treatment (ran it through google)and here is what I got English>Romanian then Romanian>English "Direct life with arms Wealth He shook his death with words of fate Targeting chaos in the hands of hate Influencing policy in sight of politeness Nature Pushing aside economic growth Humanity sliding rapidly back to one U.S. dollars Hair pulled from the earth to bend it to your You bastard everyday super behind your evil Wal-Mart" lol mine didnt turn out as wacky as yours. Darn
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« Last Edit: November 24, 2009, 03:31:30 PM by TheGrayK »
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« Reply #11 on: November 25, 2009, 12:19:04 PM » |
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Here's some advice about the translations: Try translating it through more than one language. This is what mine looked like:
English>Welsh>Afrikaans>Lithuanian>Chinese>Thai>English
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« Reply #12 on: November 25, 2009, 12:53:54 PM » |
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About life with arms Landing Swinging death with target words Directed chaos in the hands of hate Effects on class with the eyes of Courtesy
Press the nature aimed at economic development Humanity fell again in search of quick money Pull your hair in the world to bend to their
You bad SUPER LIFE behind the evil Wal-Mart
Hmm not quite as wacky but I do enjoy reading it LOL.
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« Reply #13 on: November 25, 2009, 01:18:15 PM » |
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Indeed. I liked it. There are still some deep lines in here.
I ventured out into the chill Although it was against my will
My job was to remove the trash In hopes that I might earn some cash
Before I made it to the bin, My ears were torn by sudden din
When it stopped I looked around You'd not believe what I had found
A thousand leprechauns appeared! I'd never seen a thing so weird
They gathered in the trees and shrub Assembled in some sort of club
They turned their heads to look at me And suddenly I could not see
Impermanently was I blind, But seeing things, I wouldn't mind
I heard one say, "What should we do?" Another said, "I've got no clue."
As small and tiny as they are, The high pitched voices were bizarre
"Discovered, we have never been, Not by humans, nor their kin."
This third voice was quite new to me It was commanding.... chief, maybe?
"Just throw him in the caravan, And bind with ropes his feet and hands."
And so the rope was thusly tied A gag and tossing, too, applied
I heard the wheels of wagons turn Those of which I'd later learn
Were taking me to far away I'll tell you more another day
(to be continued...)
Improv. Made it up as I went. Kind of nonsensical, but fun nonetheless.
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To avoid double posting, here's the next one. It's quite sad.
The flower, growing silently above Rumors tell it's nectar is a potion That introduces you to truest love It's nothing but silly superstition Of course, it works for everybody else But then again, nothing has worked for me And while my starving heart starts to convulse My dying wish is to have died with thee Your death would pain me, please don't get me wrong I'd never wish your you to be deceased If only you would stoop to play along You'd see that I am not an ugly beast This night might be my last, my young songbird I'm happy that your song is one I've heard
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« Reply #14 on: January 21, 2010, 01:12:28 PM » |
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Nice Poems Relym.
Ive built my life around a thought, created by the lies portrayed by the T.V.
My world crashed and for you I fought, after all this you still found it easy to leave me.
Left all alone to tread and trot, My own death I begin to plot.
Continued later maybe.
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