A poem i wrote (sorry i posted this in wrong place last time)

[Doom]

 

If tears could build a stairway
And memories a lane
We would walk right up to Heaven
And bring you back again

No farewell words were spoken
No time to say goodbye
You were gone before we knew it
And only God knows why

Our hearts still ache in sadness
And secret tears still flow
What it meant to lose you
No on will ever know

But know we know you want us
To mourn for you no more
To remember all the happy times
Life still has much in store

Since you'll never be forgotten
We pledge to you today
A hallowed place within our hearts
Is where you'll always stay

[pOWERVANcLARK]

Dood, thats gold. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

[Doom]

thanks...i had a couple typos but i think you can guess what the correct words are

[MajesticTurnip]

I love the first four lines, and the steady rythm 

Nicely written!

[Doom]

thanks turnip
i appreciate the sypport

[Woo]

its a really nice poem, though I had a strange feeling that it was kinda familiar. I think a friend of mine wrote something similar though much shorter about her grandfather in one of my sketchbooks once. other than that, it's very good work. ^^ strong, emotional and meaningful.