Disclaimer: It's been about 3 years since I've touched actionscript properly, so please bear with me...

From what I can see it looks a lot like AS1 code. It definitely won't work in an AS3 project, and you may or may not have luck in an AS2 project. The other thing with the onClipEvent code is that it has to be placed on the timeline *on* the object that you want to work with, which may be causing you some trouble. (ie, you click on the object, then bring up the actionscript window with F9).
Haven't looked at the tutorial video as I've got limited bandwidth, but from the code you've posted they're the two major things that stick out to me at the moment.
One thing you could try doing is giving your clip an instance name (let's use "myCharacter" for an example). Then, on the main timeline, you would replace
onClipEvent(load)
with
myCharacter.onLoad = function()
and
onClipEvent(enterFrame)
with
myCharacter.onEnterFrame = function()
I would also check that you have an equal number of left and right brackets and braces...

that is the () and {}.
See how you go with that.