The drawings are nice.
There's nothing wrong with rendering out things, and these are rather good in that regard I think.
But you might want to focus on lineart aswell. I find it really beneficial to do lots of quick studies, a few pages of the same subject. Repetition is a big part of the learning process. Also try to feel the form ( form = 3D, shape = 2D ), the easiest way to do so I think is to block in loosely and add cross-contours for volume. Try to avoid stiffness, I find that when I copy photographs I go into shape-copying mode ( very 2 dimensional, you need to think trough the form and 'design' it onto the page, going for a more dynamic and sculptural effect. ). A good read about what I mean is here:
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=160487For me learning to distinct between drawing with form and drawing shape was an important breaktrough. ( that why I cannot recommend Bridgman's anatomy books enough ) There's nothing wrong with shape copying btw, it's a good way to copy what you see, but there's the danger of turning into human xerox machine. If you want to get good at drawing from imagination form knowledge is important.
Anyway, keep up the good work
