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« on: January 13, 2010, 09:29:29 AM » |
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Sooo, here is my little splurging space now I guess. ^^ I'll just stick poems and story ideas and random thoughts up here for you lovely people, then run off as swiftly as I may. ^^
Poem First, me thinks. Writing this as I go.
The girl has stopped, its time to box her.
Wrap her up in card and glitter,
Make her shine like diamonds while she lays dormant.
Loving.
Sleeping.
Losing.
Weeping.
Cruising past the days till she awakes,
blinks her eyes and shivers and shakes
and holds herself into the light
of a lovers embrace, to provide respite
from the cold, the clinging sleep,
the shadows of dreams that slither and creep
and hunter her down
Thats all I have so far. But I'll work on it.
Hopefully coming soon: Story ideas!
any advice? needs tuning and.... finishing...
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Airy
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« Reply #1 on: January 17, 2010, 05:47:40 PM » |
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I really like that. You really give it all your emotion. Good job!
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Woo
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« Reply #2 on: January 17, 2010, 08:26:51 PM » |
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Thanks, I have a lot of poems on this section, but most of them have slipped back a few pages. but they used to get a good deal of attention ^^ I'll see if I can find a good one if you like sometime.
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now." <3 Florence. Woo: 4 Relym: 18 Snowman: 1 Halowood: 5 Iota: 5 some_guy: 0 TheGrayK: 1 Nimnim: 2 - Tisys Lamyl - |
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« Reply #3 on: January 18, 2010, 03:02:50 AM » |
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« Reply #4 on: January 19, 2010, 03:21:05 AM » |
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now." <3 Florence. Woo: 4 Relym: 18 Snowman: 1 Halowood: 5 Iota: 5 some_guy: 0 TheGrayK: 1 Nimnim: 2 - Tisys Lamyl - |
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« Reply #5 on: January 19, 2010, 09:14:38 AM » |
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Holy crap Woo!!!
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« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2010, 09:30:13 AM » |
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lol, they do get a bit morbid now and then.
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now." <3 Florence. Woo: 4 Relym: 18 Snowman: 1 Halowood: 5 Iota: 5 some_guy: 0 TheGrayK: 1 Nimnim: 2 - Tisys Lamyl - |
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« Reply #7 on: January 19, 2010, 09:39:15 AM » |
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Nah i'll be fine
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« Reply #8 on: January 19, 2010, 09:45:35 AM » |
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you make no sense sometimes.
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now." <3 Florence. Woo: 4 Relym: 18 Snowman: 1 Halowood: 5 Iota: 5 some_guy: 0 TheGrayK: 1 Nimnim: 2 - Tisys Lamyl - |
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« Reply #9 on: January 19, 2010, 10:18:20 AM » |
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Agreed.
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John and Mary had never met before, much like two hummingbirds who had also never met before.
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« Reply #10 on: January 19, 2010, 01:15:08 PM » |
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I'm not supposed to make sense. I'm French...we tend to not make any sense what so ever
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« Reply #11 on: January 20, 2010, 04:15:22 AM » |
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thats not really true...
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now." <3 Florence. Woo: 4 Relym: 18 Snowman: 1 Halowood: 5 Iota: 5 some_guy: 0 TheGrayK: 1 Nimnim: 2 - Tisys Lamyl - |
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« Reply #12 on: January 20, 2010, 04:17:22 AM » |
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It can be if you think about it. We attacked our own contry at one point and time
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« Reply #13 on: January 20, 2010, 04:20:47 AM » |
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Who hasn't?
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"I see London, I see Sam's Town. Holds my hand and lets my hair down, roll's that world right off my shoulder. I see London, I see Sam's Town now." <3 Florence. Woo: 4 Relym: 18 Snowman: 1 Halowood: 5 Iota: 5 some_guy: 0 TheGrayK: 1 Nimnim: 2 - Tisys Lamyl - |
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« Reply #14 on: January 20, 2010, 04:25:01 AM » |
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Good point...but we have torrorists that live in France...that are French...they do not really make sense...
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