muzz finally posted some work...

[muzzoid]

cheers guys.

A random girl in a weird costume...



oh and an uninspired portrait that i just noticed has the same face  and angle as the girl in this post...

[Pieter]

Where did you get the model and the UV's? Can you download it from his site?
Seems like something I should give a shot at  

As far as crits go, left arm on the girl seems slightly too short, and the right eye on the portrait looks flattened out.
For the rest you're really doing nicely, keep pushing those forms.

[muzzoid]

Cheers man .

With that short arm, i actually drew the gun over the arm and it is the right length if you remove the gun, but ill see what i can do about selling it better.

for the model, go to here. http://boards.polycount.net/showthread.php?t=71882

I suggest using mops second uv set which you can find in there. though with that one the obj is a little messed and i found i had to load the obj into max as a single object or it will look like its been through a blender.

[muzzoid]

d.....d.....du....du....dump

[Twin-Dragon88]

That's a lot of work that you put up. Great to see! Head studies are fun, I also like to see your hybrids! You should take that one step further and draw their skeletons to really solidify their forms. Your work really shows, especially with the girl's portrait! Keep up the work!

[Pieter]

Play with the edges on our lips, you tend to outline them too hard.

[muzzoid]

Yeah agreed man .

Thanks.

[muzzoid]

Damn it i just realised that most of this post has characters and faces standing in the same direction... i gotsa get rid of that crutch.

[Bucks]

That's some awesome stuff there man, I really like your pencil sketches and i really like the two girls on the floating island with the guitars. I find the face in sketch07 quite appealing.