enter the stomach cove...once again

[TheEYE]

The life drawing is bloody excellent man!
Your better half?

[Katatafisch]

thanks man, yes its my beautiful girlfriend ^^
i wish i could draw better to make her look nearly as beautiful as in reality


i need to learn animation, so i tried one...what do u guys think, any critiques?

[brettamatowski]

I see your light source in the animation is from the left.  It took me a bit to find the shadow.  I think it gets lost within the smoke because it blends in too well with it.  Maybe lighten up the shadow?  Afterall, it is an explosion which produces some light from its core. 

[Pieter]

Timing needs some work, should be faster in the beginning and slower in the end I think.

[Katatafisch]

yeah i agree with you pieter! i thought about that too, but ps has not many options for the timing ^^

and brett, youre right with the shadow, plus i didnt do the shadows in the last frames, coz it wouldve been too mcuh work XD im so lazy
but youre right, i could also get rid of the shadow somehow

thanks alot guys

[brettamatowski]

Good start though 

Glad to see you're taking on animation.

[Katatafisch]

thanks brett, i hipe i can make some more soon

oh my god, this has been a long day, im almost sleeping but i didnt want to, do i drew but nothing good came out XD

ill post that crappy crapster crap nonetheless


enjoy

and have a wonderful and pieceful night my beloved brackenwood forest

zzzZzzZzzz

[Loathsome]

Man I love that color there but I think you over did the blue backlight at the side. It might just be me though.

edit: lmao I just saw the penis

[Alcaknight]

I didn't notice that till just now either haha. 

[the Deuce]

I noticed the penis and nothing else.






Cool space guy. Looks like he's holding his breath. That space helmet must not be workin' too well.

[Katatafisch]

haha liol thank you guys, it was just somthing before bed ^^
lmao only guys talking about the penis XD

heres another thing before going to bed, some renderings...this was actually to cheer me up a bit, coz somehow nothing else i start works, except rendering exercise


have a good night everyone

[Katatafisch]

working on a painting...dunno what to think about the choice of colors and overall composition, i could really use crits for this..thanks in advance



greetings

[Twin-Dragon88]

I like how the eye is lead from the bottom left figure to the one with the outstretched arm and finally to the blue encased figure. One thing I have to say it that that guys arm looks huge. It's going away from the viewer yet the hand is almost as big as the head. I would play around with the foreshortening a little more. Also while your playing with that try and make his reaching more energetic. Can't wait to see the finish.

[Katatafisch]

thanks alot, yeah youre totally right! i will try to fix that, when i find the time to work on it some more...what do you think of the choice of colors as a basic sheme? im soooo not sure about that ^^


and hey, i have a blog now, i will post game projects there, development art on a game project i will start soon and some other game design related stuff.

for those who are interested, heres the url:
http://katatafisch.blogspot.com/

and i would like to know if there are more of you guys having a blog, i would like to follow you

thanks for reading, geeeeeeetings

[Twin-Dragon88]

I would go a little more orangy/yellowy/sandy colour with the rocks and stuff, lower the saturation. It will make the blue stand out more.