
Nathan man..... I'm kinda speechless here.....
That was really quite polished, you totally exceeded all my expectations!!

Story and plot wise there are a few issues. I found that the story moved too fast in the beginning, and I wasn't really sure what was goi9ng on for the first few scenes. You could have cut the scene with the girl meeting the cat, and the next scene where she is explaining that she can't go because of her blind old grandpa. They do not add to or advance the plot in any way. That extra time could have been used to set up the story at the beginning.
The art, animation, and sound were really good, you have come one hell of a long way man!
Overall, I am very impressed and give you 4/5!
