My new animation "Jill"

[JamesLion]

hey all. my new animation "Jill" is up on newgrounds....and i need some brackenwood support!

clicky here-->http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/450699

I would love if you watched it and honestly I would like a high rating....hahah....thanks! feel free to comment about it and critique it!

[SeeHaus]

Visual Style: A
Animation: B-
Creepiness: A
Story: ?


I liked the way it looked but there wasn't much movement and I didn't get the story. A guy is asked to go in a cave by a girl and then she kills him? He slips and falls? I don't know.... oh and I liked the letters that changed from Jill to Play.
Not much more to say, except maybe make it more obvious with a description for the uninitiated among us. Hope this is useful.

[JamesLion]

Well the things you gave me an A on were the things i really worked on. As for story....I thought it wasnt necessary for a story.....cus i got my point across....i thought....hahahah....thanks for watching! and ill definantly consider your recommendations.

[Anghenfil]

I agree with SeeHaus.  It looks fabulous, but I really didn't understand it at all.  Next time pitch your story to someone you trust before you animate it, because it'll save you a lot of time and grief down the line.

[Pie-Lover]

I thought the animation, effects, artwork and mostly the voice acting where magnificent. The art and colours had a verry eerie feeling and the voicing topped it off. It was really well done. The use of colours was deliteful and the animation, even if it was mainly tweens, was so so smooth. Well done, I gave it 5!

[Jack Bz]

Wow, it looked gorgeous, and everything about the sound design was great. You have great skill, so I'd like to see something with a bit more substance. If you tried to make a horror movie cartoon type of thing, it would rock.

[JT1]

I liked it. It reminds me of Adam Phillips' "Hitchhiker" and "3:33AM" and the "Childrin R Skary" series.