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« on: July 30, 2008, 11:28:00 AM »
My fave story i wrote.. from a while ago.

i am actually quite proud of it

http://crumbtales.blogspot.com/
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« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2008, 12:19:49 PM »
GREAT story.  I thought that the past was the future until right after the accident, so the twist really got me.
Good job on the epilogue and nice little hidden refrences  Tongue
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« Reply #2 on: July 31, 2008, 09:55:53 AM »
thanks v much grey fox!
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« Reply #3 on: September 25, 2008, 06:30:28 AM »
Love your story <333

Lulz I have a friend named Rick that is kinda like the chara in your story xDD I was like omg Rick you have a story! It was funny :3
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« Reply #4 on: December 03, 2008, 08:53:33 AM »
Pretty decent story, the only real flaws I can see are in puntuation and grammar.
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