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« on: August 13, 2008, 05:39:40 PM » |
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This is a rough walk cycle for an assessment at college, ive got to in between more and clean it up. Just wondering if you guys have any crits for me. (it was amusing watching how to walk in high heels videos for reference, eg, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=usrs6cm2vQg)  <![CDATA[<a href="http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8020/walkwomanvg9.swf" target="_blank">http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8020/walkwomanvg9.swf</a>]]> |
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« Reply #1 on: August 13, 2008, 06:08:09 PM » |
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WOW very swift the walk cycle is very good for a woman in high heels and the character design is excellent  well done |
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« Reply #2 on: August 13, 2008, 06:58:14 PM » |
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Nice work. I really like the character too, nice exagerated proportions. On the animation, maybe delay the arms one or two frames or so from the rest of the walk so it'll be a little less mechanical (tough I'm not an animator, so this could be bad advice I'm giving  ). |
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« Reply #3 on: August 13, 2008, 07:07:43 PM » |
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Thanks guys. Ill try putting a little bit more overlap action on the arms like you suggested, its a good idea,  . |
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I'm guessing this is where I put something funny..
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« Reply #4 on: August 14, 2008, 04:29:02 AM » |
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I'm horrible at walking cycles because I never really knew how it worked. Obviously, you do and even go to college for it, the walking cycle is awesome I can't wait to see it finished. Also, what do you go to college for?
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« Reply #5 on: August 14, 2008, 05:05:19 AM » |
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I think you should make the walk more slow, even if it's just keyframes it will be a bit too fast for a walk in high heels.
Now, I'm not a woman but they sure as hell like to complain about their pain after walking in high heels.
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« Reply #6 on: August 14, 2008, 02:16:17 PM » |
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« Reply #7 on: August 14, 2008, 03:48:12 PM » |
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<![CDATA[<a href="http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/9131/walkwomanxh8.swf" target="_blank">http://img292.imageshack.us/img292/9131/walkwomanxh8.swf</a>]]> Nice job, now just clean it up a tiny bit and maybe add a background to polish it all off.  |
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« Reply #8 on: August 15, 2008, 02:54:40 AM » |
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Now we're talking! Much better.
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« Reply #9 on: August 15, 2008, 03:54:16 AM » |
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That looks much better.
I'm a bit confused with the colouring tough, did you deliberatly coloured outside of the lines and all? (As in going for a scruffy look)
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« Reply #10 on: August 15, 2008, 04:55:50 AM » |
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very well done! amazing work!
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« Reply #11 on: August 15, 2008, 07:20:36 AM » |
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thanks guys . Rubber, that colouring is called the "colour me in 30 min before its due technique"  . I really leave things too late... |
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