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Do Not Think of What it Is You Eat . . .But of Who
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« on: September 30, 2008, 09:07:59 AM » |
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There Once Was a Man Who Made Fantastic Sweets
He Was Very Popular For His Delicious Treats
He Even Ran His Very Own Shop
After He Invented a Gum That Could Pop
Everyone Felt His Candy Was Great
Never Came a Second Thought As They Ate
For He Had the Finest Candies Ever Booked
No One Guessed As To What He Cooked
But The Man Had a Secret a Secret He Kept
For He Snuck Into Houses As the People Slept
And As Through Their Houses He Did Sneak
His Daily Business Was At Its Peak
As Though It Obviously Seems
They Could Hear the Childrens' Screams
For The Children Were Hunted and Then Slain
None Knew Where Had Gone the Child’s Brain
People Began To Suspect As the Children Vanish
And The Killer They Certainly Planned To Banish
They Soon Found the Candy man Was Laughy
For He Put His Victims in the Taffy
Soon As They Could They Had Him Caught
All The While the Truth They Sought
When They Asked “Why?” He’d Respond and Say
“It Was To Prevent Tooth Decay”
So Consider This As You Continue To Chew
Do Not Think Of What It Is You Eat . . . But Of Who
For Perhaps the Man Who Ran His Shop
Maybe His Hobby Never Did Stop
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This is the original poem, written by myself, that later inspired me to begin work on my upcoming series.
No idea stealing please.
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« Last Edit: November 27, 2008, 10:56:42 PM by Poesbird »
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Nimnim
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« Reply #1 on: September 30, 2008, 09:45:41 AM » |
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...kinda creepy, I loves it.
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Per me si va nella citta dolente,
per me si va nell eterno dolore,
per me si va tra la perduta gente. |
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« Reply #2 on: September 30, 2008, 01:02:03 PM » |
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hehehee - thank you  |
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« Reply #3 on: October 01, 2008, 09:38:39 AM » |
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*Munches on Taffy* Yah great story <33 and it does keep teeth clean =). Please write moarr!! I am your fan o wo
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~Life is delicious ~  |
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« Reply #4 on: October 01, 2008, 09:43:51 AM » |
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YAY a fan! |
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« Reply #5 on: October 01, 2008, 10:28:18 AM » |
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I read a storie where licorice was made of rat blood. mmmm...blood.
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Per me si va nella citta dolente,
per me si va nell eterno dolore,
per me si va tra la perduta gente. |
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"how do they get the bones out?"
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« Reply #6 on: November 26, 2008, 08:42:54 AM » |
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taht is so kewl
cant wait to see the flash animation ^^
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The sunrise does not feel beautiful A diamond never feels precious. It isn't about what you feel like- it's about who you are I saw this on *halowood*'s sig and i had to see the context... snowman just became a million times cooler and this forum that much more awesome 0.o Yeah I wasn't about to let her come in here and keep that shit up. I like this forum.
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« Reply #7 on: November 26, 2008, 09:50:54 AM » |
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Wow that was clever and original. Something very rare in writing these days. I commend you on your poetry skill. Please write more |
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John and Mary had never met before, much like two hummingbirds who had also never met before.
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"how do they get the bones out?"
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« Reply #8 on: November 27, 2008, 01:44:52 AM » |
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i must wonder tho... where the heck did you come yo w/ this idea?
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The sunrise does not feel beautiful A diamond never feels precious. It isn't about what you feel like- it's about who you are I saw this on *halowood*'s sig and i had to see the context... snowman just became a million times cooler and this forum that much more awesome 0.o Yeah I wasn't about to let her come in here and keep that shit up. I like this forum.
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« Reply #9 on: December 03, 2008, 08:47:44 AM » |
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I like the dark humor kind of things. It reminds me of Tim Burton in a way. I enjoy macabre stories a lot and this was no exception.
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John and Mary had never met before, much like two hummingbirds who had also never met before.
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"how do they get the bones out?"
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« Reply #10 on: June 27, 2009, 05:01:22 PM » |
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*bump* more people hafta see this  |
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The sunrise does not feel beautiful A diamond never feels precious. It isn't about what you feel like- it's about who you are I saw this on *halowood*'s sig and i had to see the context... snowman just became a million times cooler and this forum that much more awesome 0.o Yeah I wasn't about to let her come in here and keep that shit up. I like this forum.
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