Rat 2 WIP

[tyokio]

Full version has been taken down, replaced link with the small 30sc scene c:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yX5s5uFaDPo


This is how far I've gotten so far, I have a lot of work to do on it haha. I have still got some tweaking to do because I still dont think it flows 100% yet. I do love some of the scequences in this though, some f it is really dynamic and well put together.. other parts feel like the timing is a little off and it kinda messes up the mood a little.

Any more pointers (if you can make out any because it is rough in some areas) I'd love to hear em. I want this to be miles better then anything I've ever made C:

[Brakken]

Hell yeah!
 

Now that that's out of the way:

I think the blood drop would hang in the water for even just a moment longer before fading.

That's all I got at the moment 

Loved the running along rooftops bit!

I do hope this one's a little more clear than Rat 1. I found the first hard to follow.

[tyokio]

thats one of the things I'm trying my best to sort out on this one, I'm putting more effort into making sure that this movie flows better and revealing details which add to the story.

[Pieter]

Very cool! Some sweet animations and atmosphere going on, keep working on it!
Where can I view the first one?

[tyokio]

thanks c: I got myself to animate the roof scenes today, I just couldnt wait to animate them haha.

also the first one can be seen here, http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/350079 the origional version got first place but I felt the changes in the enhanced version were really needed. It certainly shows its age now haha.