yeah maybe its not th brushwork or the missing details thats missing to me, it became obvious as i took another glimpse at that robo helmet that i like quite alot, i also checked ashley wood's stuff, i think it is the way you work with edges and the overall form, it just looks that at some points there is too few information given to the eye concerning either details or the overall form. i love obvious brushwork too! and i didnt mean rendering everything out to perfection so it looks like a photograph...in a painting everything is possible, in a photograph youre somewhat limited, if you dont add some manipulation to it.
yeah i know you and i know how you feel about details and having that rough style (which i rly like), was just an idea i had looking at your work ^^
i think the same way with keeping it rough to a certain degree, but i think everything has to fulfill a certain function in a painting, tho i am a person who likes to get lost in details and loves to render out stuff and all that, but thats somewhat artistic personality i guess.
seems like illustration looks like a good field for you, tho the question is if your style meets the contemporary illustrational style, isnt it?! i could see you as a concept artist, painter and maybe comic artist, but im not sure about your linework, but maybe youll get up a whole new style of comic books with that kinda style all over the book ^^
just thought u might try some details out some time

anyways cant wait to see some more of your stuff buddy